PAL1234567891's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[No-Man #13]

I would suggest to make the letters a little bit bigger on your next comic.

SuperPhil64 responds:

If you click on it it should make the image bigger and easier to read. Tho i'l definitely work
on the font size thing, a few people brought that to my attention.

[Lüge (Lie)]

I like hove the lie lines cover the eye of that woman. Maybe it wasn't directly, but it looks like lies make people blind. :)

Nersul responds:

Yes they do

[Love]

Very interesting. Maybe you could use a more well-covering tool like watercolour to make a better effect. :) Just a question: was it an important exercise book? Coz it looks like some maths or physics stuff. :P

Username047 responds:

Yeah bro it's my university notebook where i right important stuff but like when i'm done learning them i draw over, water color would be cool but like the paper isn't meant for water it would like rincle up ...

[Always on my Mind]

Interesting, but I really miss the strong colours from the picture. :(

Madame-origami responds:

The strong colours miss you too. They're waiting for you to call back and to apologize for that incident at the party last week. I'm sure you can all be friends again.

[Duo]

I think it's too dark. You could use a brighter or not black background.

Cope2K responds:

Oh absolutely, these two and the other characters from the series will all go on a background for the final pic. This is just to show the characters. I should make this lighter anyway. Thanks for the comment ^_^

[SonicDaHedgeHog]

Cool concept but the fire line at his feet isn't totally clear. :/ :D

SmokeryDots responds:

No, maybe not, but thanks:)

[Female singer]

Why haven't you drawn her left eye? This omission dont make the composition better.

Flashmovieboy responds:

I considered drawing the left eye, but after I got on with it, I realized that it does not look that beautiful to have eyes so close to each other so I decided not to.

[Rosetta]

Wow! Very photographic! But the background doesn't fit into this style.

Firewater12 responds:

Thanks for your appreciations on how photorealistic the painting is.

However, I wish I can have a little more of your insight on how the background does not fit. Well maybe some more painting will come and you will comment.

Thanks for your time in writing this.

[Zombie Mecha Hitler - W/Pot]

Now this really mean? Its like a drawing from an 8 year old. What are those lints in the background? Try to clean it with ps.

pockets08 responds:

Argument invalid.